Album advert second draft

This is the second draft of my album advert. I have made some changes to the image since getting feedback from my teacher. The feedback that I got was that when looking at the image, she was most drawn to the background of the picture straight away instead of my singer. As a result of getting this feedback, I have changed the size and angle of the image, it cuts out the guitar, but it is an extreme close up which is an intimate aspect for the audience. I plan on making more changes to my album advert when I have my final feedback from my teacher.